Today we tackled several subjects at once in our new PD cycle: we investigated the CCSS demands on readers; we explored the reciprocity between reading and writing growth; and we practiced using the first (of many!) alternative tools for teaching the craft of writing sophisticated sentence structure. All in 100 minutes. Really. Check out the process:
First, we annotated sentences taken from several CCSS exemplar texts, noticing how the sentences worked as well their demands upon readers (we also guessed at their grade level band.)
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| Little Women is a 6-8 exemplar |
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| A Drop of Water: A Book of Science and Wonder is an exemplar for grades 2-3 |
After reflection and the big "reveal," we looked at some of the research on effective grammar instruction (hint: it's not how we were taught) and then finally got to play with a few sentences ourselves. The strategy we looked at this week was sentence -- and paragraph -- unscrambling. The below example is from the first page of another CCSS exemplar,
The Black Stallion. The teams of teachers came up with several different versions, but the three below most clearly show how writers can play with the placement of clauses to create different effects. Which do you think is most effective?